1: include a hooking introduction or an insuring start to the story.
2: make sure you build up suspense instead of telling it at once.
3: Include some Language Features.-Metaphors
-Alliteration (Words that all start with the same letter)
-Personification (comparing something to a human: the trees waved. which trees don't wave for real, but humans do.
5: Include heaps of imagination, but make sure the story's still realistic.
I hope this helped you with your writing. If you have any other writing tips or thing you think I could add please leave a comment to help me.